Sunday, 22 May 2016

Rainbow Snippets 21/22 May



Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook Group that invites authors to post 6 sentences of their work each weekend. It can be from anything you like, your current WIP, a recent release, the golden oldie that even you had forgotten you had written, or just a scrap of an idea (as long as it has 6 coherent sentences). Nothing of your own work worth mentioning? How about a 6 sentence review of your favourite LGBTQ+ story.

With the first round of edits finished on Resistance I thought we'd have another clip of Rick and Mal. Here's the start of Chapter Two. Whatever had Rick worried, they seemed to be over it.


“Here?” Mal choked out.
Rick pushed his body up against the wall and spread his arms. He felt the pull on his waistband give a little and the pinch in his balls lessened just enough to be enjoyable rather than painful.
“Here.” Mal repeated, in a tone that implied it had been his intention all along. The warmth returned to Rick’s back and Mal’s voice came from right behind Rick’s ear this time, all hesitancy gone. “On the stairs.”

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7 comments:

  1. Sounds like Mal knows what he wants. :-)

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  2. Nicely increasing heat in this snippet.

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  3. I just re-read Resonance this week, and after this hot little snippet, I may have to re-read it again. ;D Glad to see Rick worked out whatever problem he had. lol

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  4. Nice bit of heat and tension between them here.

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