Saturday, 16 January 2016

Rainbow Snippet - 16/17 Jan



Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook Group that invites authors to post 6 sentences of their work each weekend. It can be from anything you like, your current WIP, a recent release, the golden oldie that even you had forgotten you had written, or just a scrap of an idea (as long as it has 6 coherent sentences). Nothing of your own work worth mentioning? How about a 6 sentence review of your favourite LGBTQ+ story.

My six lines today come from my current (and unbetaed) WIP, Resistance.


Right about now he had the urge to place a hand between Rick’s shoulder blades, press his face to the dirt, tug that shirt up, trousers down, and rut against him like they had that first time. His come streaked across the vivid orange and reds of Rick’s dragon.
In the grounds of a church! Certainly Allah would have a special Hell for him then. In fact Allah and God would probably gang up on him and find a perfect spot to punish him for all eternity. Probably watching this very scene and unable to do anything about it.


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28 comments:

  1. Kate Lowell16 January 2016 at 18:16

    This is a great snippet. :)

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    1. Lillian Francis16 January 2016 at 19:58

      Thanks. It's hard to find a snippet 6 sentences long that feel rounded enough to post :)

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  2. PD Singer16 January 2016 at 18:18

    There's a punishment for you.

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  3. Louise Lyons16 January 2016 at 18:36

    Naughty thoughts, I wonder if he'll give in to his urges :)

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    1. Lillian Francis16 January 2016 at 20:00

      In the church grounds! Also Sunday Service has just broken up so they'd have quite an audience.

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  4. Rebecca James16 January 2016 at 19:02

    That urge sounds really hot. His guilt is great mixed with his naughty urges.

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  5. R Phoenix16 January 2016 at 19:20

    Hot and funny. Perfect combination. I'm intrigued--can't wait to read more!

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    1. Lillian Francis16 January 2016 at 19:56

      Thanks. If you're interested in finding out about that 'first time' the prequel to this story is free at ARe.

      https://www.allromanceebooks.com/mobile/details.html?pid=1910688&cat=145

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    2. Lillian Francis16 January 2016 at 20:02

      The prequel is called Resonance.

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    3. R Phoenix16 January 2016 at 20:11

      Oh, awesome. Got it and looking forward to reading it. Thanks!

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  6. Nephy's World16 January 2016 at 20:43

    Great snippet. Someone's got a powerful need for lovin'

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  7. rosy500016 January 2016 at 23:23

    Mal, you naughty naughty boy! Those are two very hot sentences! Before common sense and guilt set in.

    This definitely whet my appetite for the full story! You never cease to amaze how much you and fit in so few words. :D

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  8. PT17 January 2016 at 17:50

    Love Allah and God ganging up on him. LOL! Would really like to see more of this so I hope you keep posting!

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    1. Lillian Francis20 January 2016 at 07:46

      If you'd like to read about the first time Mal did that to Rick it's in my short story Resonance, which is free at ARe https://www.allromanceebooks.com/product-resonance-1910688-145.html

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  9. Anonymous17 January 2016 at 18:01

    sounds good, love to see more!

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    1. Lillian Francis20 January 2016 at 07:44

      Thanks. Maybe some more snippets from this one in coming weeks.

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  10. Chris Quinton17 January 2016 at 21:33

    God and Allah - great team, and a great line. :)

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    1. Lillian Francis20 January 2016 at 07:43

      The A team. :) Hmm. No. *pushes away ridiculous plotbunny*

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  11. Layla Dorine18 January 2016 at 02:58

    love the line about God and Allah ganging up on him, hot visual of what he was thinking about doing too. Loved this!

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  12. Clare London19 January 2016 at 10:31

    I already love this snippet *hehe*

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    1. Lillian Francis20 January 2016 at 07:41

      *grins* You have an advantage over everybody else.

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  13. diannehartsock20 January 2016 at 02:54

    He sounds like there's a bit of a rebel in him. Great snippet!

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